CoD4 Black Ops Announcement - DRAFT!

[Soon Jung]

So, I did yesterday apparently agree to draft to the announcement of Black Ops. I dont remember how it happened, but regardless, it happened. (TL has a very posh and persuasive voice, what can I say. He asks, I abide...)

So I just made the draft, and I can't express enough to you guys that this is a raw draft, not the actual announcement. I would love some feedback for it, constructive ones (not just positive as I joked about last night) It might be good to add some more meat on the bones.

Here it is:

Call of Duty 4: Black Ops Announcement

 Because of a positive amount of feedback of how many are getting Call of Duty 4: Black Ops, we in dMw are proud to announce that we will be supporting this game, and open our own dMw server on release date, which is 9th of November.


  The Game Leader will be Blunt, and the existing Call of Duty 4 Admins will be Black Ops admins as well.


  The clan tag will remain the same as in CoD4, ââ,¬ËœdMw|yournameââ,¬â,,¢.


  We hope you all will join the servers for some fun.
   So get the game, get started, and be prepared for launch!

[BrotherTobious]

Looks good to me matie!

[Blunt]

That's great Elly!:D

Thanks very much:worshippy:

[lionheart]

Slight Change.


Due to the positive response from members pledging to purchase Call of Duty Black Ops, dMw are proud to announce that we will be supporting this game,  and will open our own dMw server on release date, which is 9th of November.

Just used a little more formal language in the first sentence.

[Soon Jung]

You British with your posh articulations and big words
Changes will be made Thanks guys!

[Blunt]

Announcement has been announced:D

Much thanks to all for your input:dmw:

[TeaLeaf]

...and I've promoted it to an article so it gets some front page exposure!  Thanks all!