My New Business

[Jewelz^]

Hello ladies and gents, I am in the process of setting up my new business and would like some feedback, so please have a ganders, let me know what you think www.iConfigure.co.uk

[Jamin]

Nice and clean website :thumb:

Good luck with your venture

[Benny]

Good luck, my only comment on layout is the tick and cross on the front page. The tick looks good, but the cross doesn't immeadiatly look like a 'don't worry about it' cross. Other than that (which is subjective) looks clean and good.

Assuming you are in partnership with some people, so good luck all of you!

[Penfold]

Overall I like it. I don't understand what you do but I like it.

At a glance and looking at it with a more professional eye....

• The content uses a mix of US and UK English (such as organization)
• The punctuation (particularly commas) is all over the place making the text hard to read.
• I would also say that there is some clunky phraseology (for example saying: 'from one device to other devices' rather than: 'between devices' for example).
  
• There is a mix of uppercase and lower case characters on titles. These need to be made consistent.
• 30 years experience  needs an apostrophe - years'
  
• its in the subheader needs an apostrophe - it's
  
• Public Sector in the subheader needs a capital S and it also needs to have something before it rather than a comma. i.e. 'Retail or the Public Sector'.
  
• Educational Sector should be Education Sector
  
• up to date needs hyphens
  

I've amended your first paragraph to read:

With over 30 years’ experience in the IT industry specialising in (but not restricted to) the Education sector, iConfigure prides itself on offering a first class but competitive service across a multi-industry Spectrum. Within a short time-frame, iConfigure can have your organisation up-to-date with technology which can manage, supervise, asset and track all your mobile device needs.

Use or ignore comments as you see fit

Good luck !

[Blunt]

Overall I like it. I don't understand what you do but I like it.

At a glance and looking at it with a more professional eye....

• The content uses a mix of US and UK English (such as organization)

• The punctuation (particularly commas) is all over the place making the text hard to read.

• I would also say that there is some clunky phraseology (for example saying: 'from one device to other devices' rather than: 'between devices' for example).
  

• There is a mix of uppercase and lower case characters on titles. These need to be made consistent.

• 30 years experience  needs an apostrophe - years'
  

• its in the subheader needs an apostrophe - it's
  

• Public Sector in the subheader needs a capital S and it also needs to have something before it rather than a comma. i.e. 'Retail or the Public Sector'.
  

Good luck !

I agree with Pen, good looking at first glance, but the grammatical errors did jar.
Also:

• Under the "What we do" heading, "Set software up..." should read "Set up software..."
• In the main description, "manage, supervise, asset and track" should this read "assess"?
  

​Good luck from me too

[Jewelz^]

Such simple things :doh:
Cheers guys

[DuVeL]

Nice site Jewelz. Let me know when you want to have it translated to Dutch. :flirty:

[valdeko]

Very nice and clean site Jewelz.
Best of luck and good fortune to your business.

[T-Bag]

It's not too bad. I'm not a fan of the animated GIF though. It changes size and has a clear boarder on some of the transitions (ie where the hand is cut off, or there is a gradient). This makes it clear that the box/images are changing size. I'm NOT suggesting stretching all the images to fill a box of the same size. Changing aspect ratios looks terrible. Cutting out a couple of the frames and ensuring the edge of all the images are transparent would negate the issue. Additionally the android and iOS logos are crammed into a box, which makes them, to my eyes at least, appear clickable or roll-overable, but they're not.

If a couple of these things get tweaked it'd have a much nicer feel. Good luck in your venture.

[Switchback]

No Uggs?


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[Blunt]

No Uggs?

:roflmao:

[Sparhawke]

Apart from the grammar issues, does anyone see the smaller typesets as fuzzy or is that just me?

What do you do Jewel?

[DrunkenZombiee]

Good luck with your venture.

[Jewelz^]

Thanks for all the good luck wishes and feedback, all has been taken on board and those eagle eyed enough, will notice bits have changed.

Update to Business: Device repairs. We now repair devices, pricing is focused on iPhones and iPads because we figured most of the population have one.
We're also now on facebook! https://www.facebook.com/#!/IConfigure

Again, any feedback is appreciated.

Thanks alot,

Adam

[Switchback]

Still no uggs....


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